Personally I REALLY like the dark colours, I think if the Bondi is a hunter he needs the dark clothing (Sorry, I posted 2 of he same thing )
AGSMAThe Antichrist has ResurrectedPVKII Team, Beta Tester
edited 2:08PM
Somethign about Bondi's overal appearance makes me giggle. He feels so natural and sane in comparison to the other three vikings, which makes me wonder if sometime in the future team-oriented taunts will be added. Like how I see Lord saying "I'm surrounded by idiots" with Jeremy Irons' voice, I imagine something similar to Bondi regarding his insane teammates.
I like the tone of the beard! He suddenly started to look very much like Rollo from the Viking series. Also it makes sense to me that his cloak is dark like that too. However his shirt and pants should be brither imo so that he would fit better with the colours of the rest of the vikings. The dark colour makes his shirt and pants look very new aswell. Perhaps you could try to make them bleached and worn.
Hello Corvalho. I've noticed a difference between your 3D model and the concept art - you've put his quiver on his back and made it cylindrical. I personally disagree with this, and ask you for the reason why.
As for my opinion on how the rest of it looks, yes, it looks good. You are clearly skilled.
The reason why my writing here is so formal is that people inevitably get annoyed at my writing, so sticking to the rules of formal writing is my attempt to avoid people taking me the wrong way and getting annoyed.
Complaining and expressing disagreement and arguing are very good things to do.
If something written by me here does not look formal, it may be because I tried to make it look better than it could were it formal, or it might be that it seems all right to me without it being formal.
Somethign about Bondi's overal appearance makes me giggle. He feels so natural and sane in comparison to the other three vikings, which makes me wonder if sometime in the future team-oriented taunts will be added. Like how I see Lord saying "I'm surrounded by idiots" with Jeremy Irons' voice, I imagine something similar to Bondi regarding his insane teammates.
probably because he doesn't look as goofy as the other vikings
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Reminds me of Robin Hood.... from the Mel Brooks movie haha.
I got some stuff I'd like to share with ya, it's not really progress on what I'm currently working on, (not even sure if I should be doing this in the first place) but well.. One of these days I was sitting here in plain boredom, and decided to sculpt that one concept of a wench-like pirate healer I drew some time ago. Anyway, here is the result, take a look and tell me whether it's PVK worthy material or nah.
Here it goes:
There's still a lot of polishing to be made, specially in her face, which I only noticed after applying this material, but I guess you guys can get the idea
This is absolutely incredible, I especially like the torn dress, but I can see you have put a lot of thought into the model, the medallion around here neck is a nice touch (A nod to Pirates of the Caribbean?) I personally feel her hair should be more scruffy to fit with the pirate theme. As for the weapon choice, i'm torn, on the one hand I think the ones on the wiki fit with the character, but I do like the idea of having a small pistol, kinda like a derringer, too, kind of a ladies weapon. . Really good work Corvalho, keep it up.
For me it looks a bit like a womans torso on a mans lower body. Also, the breasts look like they have implants in them (and also they seem to sit a bit to far up on the chest). I'm not the guy who usually complains about stuff like that, but I wonder if you could tone that down a little.
Oh, and what I also meant to say: Great work, it really looks awesome.
Will Turner: You didn't beat me. You ignored the rules of engagement. In a fair fight, I'd kill you. Jack Sparrow: That's not much incentive for me to fight fair, then, is it?
For me it looks a bit like a womans torso on a mans lower body. Also, the breasts look like they have implants in them (and also they seem to sit a bit to far up on the chest). I'm not the guy who usually complains about stuff like that, but I wonder if you could tone that down a little
The pants give this impression I suppose, and then again, I wonder what kind of comments I'd have if she had not those pants there
About the breasts, that was the intention, they are well defined up there because of the bodice, pushing them up, Something similar to what this lady demostrates here.
Do you think it's too much of a problem?
AGSMAThe Antichrist has ResurrectedPVKII Team, Beta Tester
edited June 2015
hhmmm I can feel the bitchslap coming from her delicate hands. Great work, Corvo!
I'm saying it looks a bit unreal, I may have underestimated the impact of a bodice, still it's just a bit too much for my taste.
Will Turner: You didn't beat me. You ignored the rules of engagement. In a fair fight, I'd kill you. Jack Sparrow: That's not much incentive for me to fight fair, then, is it?
I think she looks cool as balls. The lack of balls? There's a joke there I'm sure.
Her pants make her seem more pirate-y, so I love them. She shouldn't look TOO lady-like, living on a boat as a battle-hardened sea-thief surrounded by men, and I think the pants help break it up.
I never liked the "belaying pin" she had in her concept, a sabre is more becoming of a pirate that would have to know how to defend themselves, woman or not.
I agree with Jon on the tiny pistol. It makes sense to have a concealable firearm for self-defense against "potential suitors", but having throwing daggers made her different.
Even if a little more badass as well, throwing daggers are cool and I'm not sure how much different that tiny pistol could be from the Skirmisher's pistols.
Now about the barrel and grog, I think it might be best to disconnect her model from the barrel's because I'm not sure her role as a mobile bar-maiden is set in stone.
Regardless, I think the barrel would make more sense if it were mounted sideways at the back of her waist, with the tap at the bottom of one of the circular sides.
I don't know how she could possibly fill a grog with how it's positioned right now unless she took it off first.
I've always thought it'd be cooler if her healing was done by blowing kiss projectiles that could double as offensive confounding charms to her enemies.
I mean, she's a wench, so it makes sense that her healing would be done through flirting with her ship mates. But that's just me.
Maybe, put the barrel down as a pickup, gives full hp, or put down 2 grog tankards filling half each. Could possibly give a drunk affect to make it different from other hp pickups, like the stun affect or something.
Bondi won't be in 3.3. 3.3 is really dependant on valve helping us to fix Mac and Linux. But we'll release it at a determined date if no fix is available.
Corvalho is working brilliantly on these weapons. We hope to show you some third person animation progress once these beautiful weapons are complete.
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As for my opinion on how the rest of it looks, yes, it looks good. You are clearly skilled.
Complaining and expressing disagreement and arguing are very good things to do.
If something written by me here does not look formal, it may be because I tried to make it look better than it could were it formal, or it might be that it seems all right to me without it being formal.
probably because he doesn't look as goofy as the other vikings
Impressive work!
I got some stuff I'd like to share with ya, it's not really progress on what I'm currently working on, (not even sure if I should be doing this in the first place) but well.. One of these days I was sitting here in plain boredom, and decided to sculpt that one concept of a wench-like pirate healer I drew some time ago. Anyway, here is the result, take a look and tell me whether it's PVK worthy material or nah.
Here it goes:
There's still a lot of polishing to be made, specially in her face, which I only noticed after applying this material, but I guess you guys can get the idea
Oh, and what I also meant to say: Great work, it really looks awesome.
Will Turner: You didn't beat me. You ignored the rules of engagement. In a fair fight, I'd kill you.
Jack Sparrow: That's not much incentive for me to fight fair, then, is it?
The pants give this impression I suppose, and then again, I wonder what kind of comments I'd have if she had not those pants there
About the breasts, that was the intention, they are well defined up there because of the bodice, pushing them up, Something similar to what this lady demostrates here.
Do you think it's too much of a problem?
Will Turner: You didn't beat me. You ignored the rules of engagement. In a fair fight, I'd kill you.
Jack Sparrow: That's not much incentive for me to fight fair, then, is it?
Her pants make her seem more pirate-y, so I love them. She shouldn't look TOO lady-like, living on a boat as a battle-hardened sea-thief surrounded by men, and I think the pants help break it up.
I never liked the "belaying pin" she had in her concept, a sabre is more becoming of a pirate that would have to know how to defend themselves, woman or not.
I agree with Jon on the tiny pistol. It makes sense to have a concealable firearm for self-defense against "potential suitors", but having throwing daggers made her different.
Even if a little more badass as well, throwing daggers are cool and I'm not sure how much different that tiny pistol could be from the Skirmisher's pistols.
Now about the barrel and grog, I think it might be best to disconnect her model from the barrel's because I'm not sure her role as a mobile bar-maiden is set in stone.
Regardless, I think the barrel would make more sense if it were mounted sideways at the back of her waist, with the tap at the bottom of one of the circular sides.
I don't know how she could possibly fill a grog with how it's positioned right now unless she took it off first.
I've always thought it'd be cooler if her healing was done by blowing kiss projectiles that could double as offensive confounding charms to her enemies.
I mean, she's a wench, so it makes sense that her healing would be done through flirting with her ship mates. But that's just me.
I guess that's me
Damn son, that's some amazing work.
My comments:
Take her down a cup size or two
Thin her thighs by about a 6th?
I'd also thin her boots a little
Love it!
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Hey guys, here goes a pic of the bow and arrows for the Bondi that I've been working on, Let me know what you guys think,
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Bondi won't be in 3.3. 3.3 is really dependant on valve helping us to fix Mac and Linux. But we'll release it at a determined date if no fix is available.
Corvalho is working brilliantly on these weapons. We hope to show you some third person animation progress once these beautiful weapons are complete.
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