Heya' I made this fiction a while back, 's not PVKII related, so that's why instead of Creative Writing I stuck it in here.
https://pastebin.com/a8x54phw
Lemme know what you fellas think, a'ight?
[EDIT]
Woops! Forgot to mention it's not done. I got a lot of stories I'm writing, plus school and shizzle, so I dunno if I might refine this and make it better, which I probably will, because of it being one of my more favored fics I'm writing.